OK, you have your target genre, a story idea and some
characters. Why not just start writing? Because without some kind of plan, a
map of the route your story will take, you’re practically guaranteed to start
with a bang and, sooner or later, look up and say, ‘Now what?’ To push the
metaphor a little further, you’ll have a full tank of petrol, but you’ll be at a
crossroads and have no idea which road to take. You won’t know where you’re
going!
Anyone can write a great beginning. Show me an unpublished
novelist, and I’ll show you a drawer full of false starts. The trick is to
keep your story running without stalling or blocking. To achieve this end, you
must have, at the very least, a basic notion of the course your lead will take
to achieve her story goal. That’s where plotting comes in.
The classic structure
Before you can begin plotting, you must understand the basic
structure of the novel. It’s a classic form, defined first by Aristotle in
Poetics, and for our purposes it’s enough to know that it consists of three
parts: the beginning, the middle and the end.
The beginning constitutes the first quarter of your novel.
Here you’ll set up your story situation, introduce all your characters, present
all necessary background information and, most importantly, begin all of your
story lines: your lead’s main story line – in pursuit of the story goal –
and any other subplots you decide to include.
The middle constitutes half your novel’s length. It
contains the principal action of the lead’s story line and all the subplots, as
well as twists and surprises and complications.
The end constitutes your novel’s last quarter. Here all
story lines resolve themselves, most notably your lead’s main story line, which
moves through distinct phases as it builds to the climactic moment and then,
finally, wraps itself up.
Note that these divisions should not be visible to the
reader. They exist solely to help you structure your story.
In this step, you’ll start plotting your novel’s beginning.
Before you can do that, however, you must ascertain the correct length for
your novel as a whole.
Determining your novel’s ideal length
Any given type of novel has a customary length or length
range. The flexibility of this length requirement depends on the kind of book.
Traditionally, book lengths have been expressed in terms of the approximate
number of words the book contains. For example, at this writing, a novel in
Silhouette Books’ Romance line must run from 53,000 to 58,000 words. A novel in
Silhouette’s Special Edition line must run from 75,000 to 80,000 words. These
are relatively tight ranges, when you consider that 1,000 words equal only four
manuscript pages. On the other hand, a historical romance for Avon Books may run
from 100,000 to 125,000 words, a looser range.
Why should you even worry about manuscript length? Why
can’t you just write your book and let it end where it wants to? First and
most important, because publishers require these lengths. They have several
reasons for doing so. On a purely business level, manufacturing costs require
that a book fall within a certain length range in order to be profitable. In the
case of paperbacks, books must meet length requirements that allow a
predetermined number of books to fit into a bookshop shelf space; even before
that, a certain number of books must fit in a shipping carton. This
mechanisation of art may sound crass, but it’s how publishing works – a reality
we have to work with if we want to sell novels.
A less hard-nosed reason is that readers have come to expect
that certain kinds of books will run to certain lengths. Fans of Silhouette
Romances don’t want books stretched to a leisurely 100,000 words any more than
devotees of Avon historical romances want books that weigh in at a puny 53,000
words.
How do you find the correct word length for the novel
you’re writing? You can use several methods.
Check with the publishers of your kind of book to see if they
offer tip sheets. These will state a length requirement.
Another way to find length requirement is to consult how-to
writing books devoted to your genre; you’ll find these books in your bookshop or
library. For example, if you’re writing a romance, you can look at Writing
Romantic Fiction, by Daphne Clair and Robyn Donald (A & C Black). Here, in
chapter one, ‘What It’s All About’, you’ll find word lengths for different types
of romance novels.
If you’re writing a category novel for a specific publisher’s
programme and can’t find the word length by any of the above methods, call the
publisher’s editorial department and ask an editorial assistant what the
preferred word length is for novels in the programme.
Failing all of this, you can come up with an approximate word
count on your own by taking a book of the type you’re writing and applying the
following formula:
Book pages x lines on a full page x 9 = number of words
Do this for half a dozen books like yours and then average
their word counts.